intensity. >> it was a damp and chilly afternoon so i decided to put on my sweatshirt. you put an exclamation point after sweatshirt. >> that is correct. i felt that the character doesn't like to be chilly. >> i see. i pulled the lever on the machine but the clark bar didn't come out. again exclamation point. >> and it can be frustrating how you put quarters and quarters into a machine. >> get rid of the exclamation points, i hate exclamation points. >> grammar, and too often the copy editors considered the nat of the publishing and they help the writers become the best they can be and there is no copy editors than those at the new yorker and mary norris that has